Commentary: Turn your bio into a business magnet

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The smart lawyer can turn a personal bio into a marketing magnet that generates leads, as opposed to a mere resume or a CV.

The trick is to turn one of your features into a benefit to the client. In other words, if you’ve partaken in a particular activity, you need to answer the question, “So what?” How does that benefit the client?

A “feature” is what something has, like a car with four doors or a new improved formula. A “benefit” is what it offers: “This car has four doors to accommodate growing families.”

Here’s how to tell the difference: When you hear a product claim, ask the question, “So what does that do for me?” If there’s no answer, you just heard a feature. If there is an answer, you just heard a benefit.

Consider a hardware store drill. The box tells you the volts and amps and RPMs, but what you’re really buying is a hole. If you’re buying lipstick, it can have a fancy formula, but you’re looking for something that makes you more attractive.

This analysis applies directly to lawyer bios. Benefits will generate leads for you. They can turn your bio into something that’s going to make people call you. The clients you’re trying to reach are looking for business benefits. They want to make and keep more money, save time, reduce risk and look good.

If you look at a lot of attorney bios, you’ll find that there are not a lot of distinctions or differences. Many partner bios begin with “Mr. Jones is a senior shareholder and is chair of the firm’s corporate practice group. He has 25 years’ experience.” So what? Those are features. Let’s revise it to say:

“Mr. Jones is a senior shareholder in the firm’s corporate practice and can counsel you through your corporate transactions with the confidence and expertise clients seek. With more than 25 years of real-world experience, he knows how to bring many time- and money-saving solutions to your business problems.”

Let’s examine some of the changes. I kept in “senior shareholder” and “corporate practice,” but the “so what” is that he can “counsel you through your real estate and corporate transactions with the confidence and expertise clients seek.”

This extends the feature into having a benefit from the client’s perspective. And what does having “more than 25 years of experience” mean for the client? Answer: “He knows how to bring many time- and money-saving solutions to your business problems.”

Another common feature that appears in lawyer bios is the fact that they lecture or speak on particular issues. But what might be a potential benefit?

• It shows you’re up to speed on the latest trends and news.
• It shows people want to hear what you have to say.
• It makes it sound as if you are frequently in front of people like your client, so you’re up to speed with their business.

Remember, your bio must spell out those benefits expressly.

Another common feature is something like, “He has testified before the Legislature and has assisted legislators and their staff in drafting laws.” If I were a client affected by that legislation, what would be the benefit of the capability you have identified?

It shows you may have some influence and credibility. It demonstrates that you know how those laws are interpreted and executed. It may show that the lawyer has helped the Legislature pass certain bills into law. Again, taking a mere capability and translate it into something that matters to the client.

Some features have no benefits for clients, like she has “been an active member of the County Bar Association where she has served on the Bar Council.” Clients expect you to belong to a bar association, and many have no idea what the bar council is. The only benefit to such info is to other lawyers, who may send you a referral; thus, for the potential client, spell it out: “and many other lawyers refer their cases to this person, who is considered a ‘lawyer’s lawyer.’”

Larry Bodine is editor-in-chief of Lawyers.com and a legal marketing expert.